World Peace by Cara I don't believe in world peace, not even when I'm high, I don't believe in world peace but I think it's worth a try, Makes me mad to see the trash all lying on the ground, And the arguments and bitching that exist all around. War and money surrounding and spreading, No matter how we try it's footsteps still treading, Natural and nice, we try to help one another, And frowned upon it starts to really bother. One thing we've all got, a good core a perfect center, I take advantage of her, I care for her, I don't want to dent her, Lost and broken those who don't care, The ones happy and blissfull, the ones who dare, those ones are rare. I don't believe in world peace, not even when I'm high, I dont' believe in world peace but I think it's worth a try, Look at all the animals all familiar and gay, Maybe people will be like that again someday.
I feel.. I feel wrong, I feel broken, I feel revolting, I feel like smokin', I feel stoned, I feel wired, I feel watched, I feel tired, I feel confused, I feel sad, I feel unimportant, I feel mad, I feel mean, I feel stained, I feel touched, I feel pained, I feel perfect.
Serenity Serenity, bliss,peacefulness,tranquility,placidity, confusing,rare,definite, spiteful,loathesome,scornful,abomination hate.
I'm not big on traditionally rhymed poetry, but I do like your first poem. I like the first line alot. You did a great job, I like the last one too, it ends in such a strong word. I definatly say that I have never met a 13 year old that can write like that. Great job.
thank you! finally someone who commented. i felt kind of stupid putting my work up cuz it's not as deep as all the others it's sort of surface work you read it and you don't really have to think alot about it, but it means alot to me
Same It's the same people, In the same spot, Singing the same song, doing the same thing at a different time.
Saphire Mirrors Far out in the distance, Across the irradiated waterless bay, I see you wandering, Lost, Alone, Broken, A fragment of grass shares my same bed, I clamor out to you, Your eyes search until our eyes are locked, Saphire mirrors, Perhaps you are my window, Am I also lost, alone and broken? Slowly you toil through the gell like water, And your dirty aura peels vibrant again, You are now new, Merely seeking a soul in need, What do I seek? Will you help me?
hi there this is my fav.. what life holds now will pas and in the mirror in the arena of youth age passes also.... keep writing dont worry change is just part of life lovenpeace from saff
[It's the same people, In the same spot, Singing the same song, doing the same thing at a different time.] If this isn't -deep- I don't know what is! Keep up the excellent work!
Shampoo, KittenX has it correct. Heron knows of your might. Saffron seas of your light. Such spontaneous Beauty. A Wonder to witnesss you write.
thank you natural! Im sorry i toook so long to answer but i haven't been in forums alot i like the chat anyway natural i love the way you wrote that comment i want to see a poem by you
well then, your poetry reminds me of when i first started, damn.. i wish i kept it. well then, i like your thoughts turned to words and form. it speaks your age and thats a grand thing. its actually quite deep if i do say so myself. if youre taking the step to look beyond oneself, thats substance, thats certainly not shallow. id like to take a moment to say this.. to all those who write about the decline of our civilization, please do more than speak out, write out, no we must act out. get involved in creating peace or at least spend time with the aims of compassionate acts. love is an action. this is not only a message to all who care, this is a reminder a desperate plea to myself. our imprint is left everywhere. i want it to be beautiful.
i don't know what happened to me i don't know whats wrong my body cant keep up and my head cant tag along i just exploded i don't know why i freaked out and i started to cry now hes mad but he wouldn't hear me out it made me angry it made me shout im sorry im going insane
I don't know how this could have happened when did she get so damn screwed? her life is all with me and it feels as though its just begun shes got it all made except one flaw who said she needs someone? anyone? here i am spewing shit as if im queen i think im right but i may be wrong she might need help ill find you
