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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sara_rose, Aug 31, 2005.

  1. sara_rose

    sara_rose Ice Queen

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    this might not be a real good poem.. but it describes exactly how i feel right now


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    They think that i’m happy

    They think i have no fears

    But they can’t see the real me

    They can’t see my tears


    I’ve tried to make it better

    I’ve tried to move on

    I wish that I was happy

    I wish i wasn’t alone


    With a cold heart

    And the wish to die

    I pick up the knife

    It wouldn’t hurt to try..
     
  2. Bliep

    Bliep Member

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    I know how that feels. Don't try, write some more poems...
     
  3. sara_rose

    sara_rose Ice Queen

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    thank you *hugs*
     
  4. o0child_at_nature0o

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    everyone gets down don't ever give up ur wounderfull :) something will turn you around. just keep expressing how you feel, much love
     
  5. sara_rose

    sara_rose Ice Queen

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    but not everyone falls so deep into the darkness...
    but thank you, i appreciate it :) *hugs*
     
  6. o0child_at_nature0o

    o0child_at_nature0o Member

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    I guess thats ture but just stay strong, you'll find light,you are light:)
     
  7. Bliep

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    Life isn't easy. But there are these moments that make it worth it. Stay strong
     
  8. sara_rose

    sara_rose Ice Queen

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    thanks guys :)
     

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