Zeroes and Ones.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shaba, Aug 30, 2005.

  1. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    This electronic brain
    Feels the same
    When it manifests
    Love.
    It writes its code
    Across my soul
    And grasps my veins
    Till the bleeding stops.
    Her digital finger
    Whispers across my hairs
    Makes them rise
    But shes not really there.
    I fell in love
    Dove across the air
    Longing to feel her touch,
    Fill this hole
    This empty space
    With your physical
    Lust.
    Now I express myself
    The same way,
    Hitting letters
    Hoping you'll hear me.
    Writing my own soul
    The black lines
    Describing what I know.
    Machine feelings
    Manufactured thoughts.
    I want to believe you,
    Your tongue
    Against mine.
    Lets make it real
    Come to me,
    And let me taste your digital love.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Pretty cool man. Internet love, perhaps? I tried that once, didn't work out so well. Anyways, nice work.
     
  3. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    beautifully written!

    i love it!

    especially,

    "I fell in love
    Dove across the air
    Longing to feel her touch,
    Fill this hole
    This empty space
    With your physical
    Lust."
     
  4. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    I just really like the way you break up your lines and thoughts... very rhythmic and flowy :)
     
  5. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    Thanks Kristin.

    You make my head big.
     
  6. raysun

    raysun D4N73_666 4861786f72

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    right on right on nice poem....
     
  7. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Yes, nice flow....
    *think I might go outside and explore nature now*
     

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