the death of daniel, man and god

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Fierce_Flawless, Jul 2, 2004.

  1. Fierce_Flawless

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    where does the empress now reside​
    who taught your heart to disbelieve​
    i'll silence the beat beneath her breast​
    to return the rythm to yours​
    there is nothing we can ever do​
    but care for each other as god so loved the world​
    and what in this world could ever matter more​
    than how i held you when you were sure you would die?​

    i remember the visions of your future​
    that flashed like a silent film across your eyes​
    when you realized we are but temporary creatures​
    and that our actions are all that take affect​

    i recall the day you decided this was enough​
    it was your exacting suicide​
    and i wonder did you know it then​
    that your inaction meant your demise?​

    i insisted on bearing ​
    the struggle of your rebirth​
    i would bleed my life from me​
    to bring you back again​
    do you realize the impact of your apathy?​

    i will carry your absence​
    into every possible end​
    until the night i do not wake from my dreams
    i'll search for the sorceress
    that swallowed your faith
    regardless of whether or not
    i'll ever dream of you again
    discounting the fact that i cannot return
    to the places i cannot
    convince my heart to come away from


     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Wow, that was wondeful! I'm not sure if you meant anything by the font getting smaller at then end, but it was a nice touch.

    It's sad when people lose faith, isn't it?

    Peace.

    PS- Your signature is absolutely devastating. The truth hurts. :(
     
  3. Fierce_Flawless

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    yyyyyyyyyyup
     
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