Sometimes I Feel Like Jesus

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by realityneversticks, Aug 28, 2005.

  1. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    Sometimes I feel like Jesus
    Every move every step I take
    No matter how seemingly insignifigant
    Shall be recorded and passed on through the ages
    Throughout the world
    Every motion will be a sign
    And will create life

    Other times I feel like a sign on the wall
    Of a lonely forgotten event
    Everyday that goes by I get more useless
    Everyday the rain pours and ink runs away
    Then the sun beats down until I crack and burn
    And those that see me, I wonder how long I in stay their minds
    Or if I was in their to begin with

    Sometimes I feel like Jesus
    If I should die it would be with meaning
    Giving my life for a great power
    I would be a symbol
    As I died women would cry for me
    Faith would blossom like roses
    The Earth would would shake in anger
    And it would not be the end
    I would rise and live on for eternity
    I would not fear death

    Other times I feel like a sign on the wall
    I fear someday soon somebody will take a good look
    Then they will see that I'm just taking the space
    Of something much more promising to come
    And would throw me to oblivion
    Yet even before that perhaps I won't be able to hang on
    The tacks that secure me rust and break
    Loosen with each day
    And one day I shall float from this wall
    To be stomped upon obliviously
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    ah, the see-saw world of the ego's drama. I feel you on this one man.
     
  3. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    its wicked though.. why does t have to be ego??? jesus was a dude, and whats wrong with trying to be like him....anyone caN DO IT . i t hink this poem is exclelent
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I agree anyone can do it. But maybe the jesus part is his spirituality, or maybe it's self importance. But the worthless feeling is definitely ego, isn't it? Look at how he describes it, with words like lonliness, being stomped to oblivion, the sun beating till he cracks and burns, just taking up space... That's not simply being modest and knowing our unimportance, that's depression.
     
  5. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    yeahhh... so is deppression about a hurt ego???
     
  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    it would seem so, in my case at least. Depressed people are always in self pity, listen to them. Sometimes it's valid of course. But I know when I'm depressed, it's because I'm wallowing in my problems and stuff.

    Anyways, I'm not saying anything against this poem, just so that's clear. I liked it.
     
  7. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    I saw it [the poem] like the rise and fall in possibilities and permission. the person feels like they can be and aer able to be jesus, but then they get scared and feel unworthy somehow.
    i guess you could say the trappings of the ego preven t a person from fully realising their inner jesus!
     
  8. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    what a back and forth struggle within....how very familiar to myself
    *claps*
     

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