"We're here for the prisoner." Shady cell Vertical bar motif "It's too late, he did himself We forgot to get his shoelaces As long as there is a way out They'll find it" Strung up Hanging down He is free No more pain Embracing the unknown Plunging head-first into the abyss The sweetest release I cannot wait To see what lies beyond This existance I want to die
Ooooh, Mike. Wait it out, things will get better. First stanza is very powerful, especially the "shady cell / vertical bar motif".
Cool shit man. But I figure, might as well get all the living I can, because the only certainty in life is death. It'll come soon enough. Anyways, I dig the poem.
so emotional... it got me, that's for sure... "Strung up Hanging down He is free No more pain Embracing the unknown Plunging head-first into the abyss The sweetest release I cannot wait To see what lies beyond This existance I want to die."
Thanks for the feedback everyone. I was really down that day, having bad thoughts. I sat down to write and that's what came out. I'm feeling alot better now though.
