Surreal Experiments

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Aug 25, 2005.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    Like a half moon- the night
    leaking out of her, homeless
    A year of the same sky,
    she says, laughing,
    Life, do not give it a second look

    (during the moment in which
    beauty is recoginized)
    a loose wind picks up your straw hair
    and disperses it throughout the damp world
     
  2. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    I love the distinct style you have been developing. :)
     
  3. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    interesting piece........ i enjoyed it
     

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