Road Movies

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Aug 15, 2005.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    the thought of a storm grazes your shoulder
    light and feathered
    your laugh more often taken
    by the cold's heavy hands
    how many windows did i lose under your walk
    sculpted by shaking
    a desert reforming under the sun
    your pockets are sand filled
    horses track dust into your mouth

    a woman is speaking of her garden at Cartegena
    her voice is dusk, grey and sober
    offering a name to cities
    demanding the feet of the moon
     
  2. trekker

    trekker Intrepid Traveler

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    Wow, that's really good.
     
  3. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Beautiful, delicate images.
     
  4. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    thanks! one could say the same thing about your writing
     
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