Tomato Obsessions

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sylvanlightning, Aug 11, 2004.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Waxy skin,
    yielding not to caressing fingers
    yet the tongue of the eye
    is a whole different story.

    Verdant sloping contours
    while young,
    resembling a perfect sphere;
    when mature,
    an ancient matriarch endowed
    with pendulous multiple curves.

    Empty hungers seek
    to immediately remove her
    from vine to mouth.

    Is beauty to be seized
    and consumed
    like ballast?

    Where is the lingering honoring,
    the joy in watching this soul grow,
    like a daughter full of moon.

    The beauty of full cycle is
    a sacrament of
    seed, fertility and decay.
    This allowing of inner marriage...
     
  2. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Juicy. I liked this. [​IMG] Made me smile.
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    All of that out of a tomato? :) Superb. Tongue of the eye...great combo!
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thanks KittenX, won't you come back soon.... :(
     
  5. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    "Verdant sloping contours
    while young,
    resembling a perfect sphere;
    when mature,
    an ancient matriarch endowed
    with pendulous multiple curves."

    I love this stanza! I wrote an ode about a mango once, but noone seemed to understand. :)
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    thank you, i love mangos
     
  7. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Impressive, I like that. Good poem. I think I'll go out back and pick one (which is the way they taste best, straight off the vine, warm from the sun), but don't worry, I'll be sure to savor it.
     
  8. Conspriacy99X

    Conspriacy99X Banned

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    haha this was a very interesting poem. Nicely done. You got my smile as well.
     
  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Namaste, banned one.
     
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