Wandering Willows

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Aug 10, 2005.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Slips of willow wander in
    whimsical traces on surface waters,
    tendrils of sea grass sliding
    on pyramidical glass.

    In a rotational sway they
    are the bhuddist teachers--
    a peacful gyrating property
    of eight sacred infinities.

    Tickled fish bellies rise
    like rainbowed moons,
    stars of silver scale cascading
    spherical droplets of cyrstal dew.

    And the wind is the conductor
    of a satirical stoic symphony,
    for willows are eternally
    sliding like wings on a breeze,

    water on green leaves,
    kisses over loverÕs sandalwood cheeks,
    stormy ochre earth finally,
    finally rooted free.
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Enjoyed this one mucho… the vivid imagery put the setting in my head and the peaceful calm it carried was welcome.



    my favorite stanza… beautiful :)
     
  3. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    Oh thats awesome!
     
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