Grass Catcher

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Aug 3, 2005.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    She held out a hand to me,
    and a shape shifter in the sunlight
    she was crafted of birch bark
    where the curious shadows dappled.

    Lay down in the long grass.
    I will show you how the rain
    bends it over--little caverns
    where the world is stretched by telescope.

    We can disappear into a sea of stems
    where the dew makes a damp moss
    pungent scent. It will be like floating
    on amber clouds, I said.

    And we will catch the tails
    of shooting stars (through lattice cracks)
    like fireflies cupped in our hands.
    Just a little... just a little softer to the left.
     
  2. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    i like that, Ive lain in the grass and imagined being tiny, thats what this reminded me of
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    ...like floating on amber clouds,

    Yum, what a beautiful image. I love star-gazing...
    My birthday is the 13th, so I'll be under the sky looking up.
    Perhaps graced by a few fireflies. Thanks, for all you offer.
     
  4. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    That was beautiful! I love you :)
     
  5. EternalHunter

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    This is one that actually feels good to me. I'm glad you liked it.
    Happy birthday Sylvan.
     
  6. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    good show
     
  7. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    This poem really reminded me of the tranquility and peace that can be sought in nature. Great feel to it.
     
  8. EternalHunter

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    Regal Queen Ann's Lace
    distant down a dew soaked meadow,
    unfurls a thousand and a thousand buds
    to the addicted tendrils of sun.

    And the daisy, the simplest petal
    of unsymettrical level and pastel tones
    they reach their shy heads from
    the taller flowers of the grass.
     
  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    A sigh and a whisper
    *speechless*
     
  10. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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  11. EternalHunter

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    But does it seem that too often we use the guise of beauty and eloquence to disguise our deeper truths?
     
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