I would like comments on my new poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Duck, Jul 28, 2005.

  1. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    http://blog.myspace.com/21366947
    top poem of course

    just wanna hear peoples reaction to it

    oh, and if you will comment in this thread, I don't care about comments on the blog thingy
     
  2. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Excellent.
     
  3. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    very good, I was realy impressed
     
  4. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    We have the power to create existences and experiences, 'twould be a sin to create shitty ones, even just for ourselves
     
  5. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    that is an interesting view... I considered something similar, but how can you sin against yourself? I know the obvious answers for this, but just think about it, can you really call what only affects us (as a person not as a people) as sin?

    plus we are allowing it, so it can't be sin
     
  6. Shampoo

    Shampoo Banned

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    your such a beautiful writer!
    i envy you!
     
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