Rip the rap on this forum flap.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TomDijon, Jul 27, 2005.

  1. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    alright, ima start this shazzam with a rap i wrote. feel free to add your own, and maybe we'll lay down a beat and slap the shit on a track... this one's called The Fault Line, and it's not really done. i guess that's where you come in...
    here goes...

    these tidal waves of wrought
    seem to move so sidle
    that our cramp on this planet's
    gonna take more then midol
    cause you know something's wrong
    when oedipus is your idol
    what I mean?
    motherfuckers gone patricidal
    whoops look out
    let's not get homicidal
    it's alot safer
    to make people suicidal
    yeah, that's right,
    don't try and fight the bridle
    you're far too content
    idle in the intertidal
    become the tide
    find something you can ride
    and make sure everyone knows
    you just tryin to stride
    confide provide
    don't ever let yourself subside
    derive the implied
    decide to reside worldwide
    Fuck the east side/west side
    contrived bona fide
    snide pride derived
    continental divide
     
  2. Zion

    Zion Member

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    yo gangsta, I offer much thanks to
    you
    do the read through
    as fluid as as a sea-dew
    not a see saw or a teeter- taughter
    nas sir
    something as beautiful as my some day daughter
    by the way
    good tips on the man slaughter
    this society makes shit hotter and harder
     
  3. TomDijon

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    i ain't no gangsta, but i got a mind for crew
    and i ain't no soldier but i got some soul for you
    ridin the waves or wrought i can see the sea-dew
    but on a sea-doo i gotta crash on through
    and it's true, you can see the steam bubblin' up
    no longer just dew, heaven's doublin' up
    clouded souls through and through , one big troublin' cup
    and like lightning, it strikes you, hell's rumblin' up
     
  4. happyhippyflower

    happyhippyflower Sucker Punch

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    TomDijon
    you remind me of cheesy commercials
    tryna get me to buy Grey Poupon
    I don't like mustard...never have
    you outta place like a crab in a pond
    wavin a wand, oh shit, that's a witch
    bitch, we're waiting...please respond
    Claim to be the bomb - off the chain
    insanely calm - bring the pain
    watch me rock'em - shook bodies droppin
    if not then umma sock'em

    i care 4 u
     
  5. stranger

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  6. BraveSirRubin

    BraveSirRubin Members

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    woot woot woot
    woot woot
    bling bling
    shazzam
    basketball, thugs,
    yeah yeah
    bitches, hoes, and more hoes,
    big car,
    bling bling,
    pool, jacuzi,
    cheap champagne,
    weed, dogs,
    woot woot,
    ass.
     
  7. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    infiltration, b, even if it means seemin g
    you will touch nobody if they don't like what they see
    and it's twisted, like oedipal motherfuckers, I agree
    but a twist in the right direction will make us a little more free
    consciously, we can even fix our mistakes
    monitored, we can even stop these shakes
    cause overcompensation's not from bein awake
    it's from being a half-baked lazy brilliant flake
    so i say play their game, but play it better then them
    raise the stakes, see their rocks and raise'em a gem
    its so easy to sit back and look smart and condemn
    but you've quarentined yourself from all the leaves on your stem
    can't you see we all share the same beautiful roots
    you boho's should know about the beat persuits
    be more astute, WE LET rap rot en route
    poetry with beats, why would we let it dillute?
    woot woot?
    you need to learn what when and where to impute,
    why how what when and where to commute,
    refute, permute and most importantly loot
    because even around beauty...
    people pollute
    speaking of which, we should all be in cahoots
    this wasn't intended to be a battle or a list for recruits
    and thanks to you mr. rubin for all that you attribute
    stereotypes and prejudisms' are great things to distribute
     
  8. happyhippyflower

    happyhippyflower Sucker Punch

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  9. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    thanks
    oh, and who on this forum raps?
     
  10. Emanresu

    Emanresu Member

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    Yo are we recordin
    or is this just a mic check
    am i alive
    have i been born yet?
    you need to remind me because sometimes i forget
    and never forget what i'm bringing to you
    words of the one true prophet steppin right through
    i've got the verse and the chapters memorized
    i've got to bring this shit down so quit lookin in my eyes
    don't feel self conscious
    just feel the conscious flow
    because consciousness is growing
    all across the globe
    a fire is catching among the young and yes
    even some of the old
    who new it before and never forgot what they'd been told
     
  11. TomDijon

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    "For the unlearned, old age is winter. For the learned, it is a time of harvest."-old hasidic saying
     
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