Lets make one big poem!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EmbraceInnerPeaches, Jul 24, 2005.

  1. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    I'll write a line, you write a line, its a community poem!



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    One night I melted, melted into my bed only to feel the lint buzz around my head
     
  2. etherealeyez

    etherealeyez Member

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    EmbraceInnerPeaches:"One night I melted, melted into my bed only to feel the lint buzz around my head"
    Etherealeyez:"Buzzing into dull drone; worries left my heart alone."
     
  3. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    Etherealeyez:"Buzzing into dull drone; worries left my heart alone."
    citrus_seas:"Looked up at the sky, I did cry, for the sun had bled"
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    One night I melted,
    melted into my bed
    only to feel the lint
    buzz around my head.

    Buzzing into dull drone;
    worries left my heart alone.

    Looked up at the sky,
    I did cry,
    for the sun had bled.

    These blazing solar flares
    bleed like buzzing obsidian,
    Le soleil noir shines darkly,
    sweet fey-heart melting.
     
  5. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Excellent.
     
  6. vynylwash

    vynylwash Member

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    it sounds trippy already
     
  7. camwoo

    camwoo Member

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    One night I melted,
    melted into my bed
    only to feel the lint
    buzz around my head.

    Buzzing into dull drone;
    worries left my heart alone.

    Looked up at the sky,
    I did cry,
    for the sun had bled.

    These blazing solar flares
    bleed like buzzing obsidian,
    Le soleil noir shines darkly,
    sweet fey-heart melting.

    Want for nothing
    All that's here was here before
    Nothing to want
    Hollow heart forevermore
     
  8. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    The strange abstract glow
    Shines beneath my mind
    Stretches across the sky
    Only to be seen by your eyes
     
  9. SoundStepper

    SoundStepper Member

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    One night I melted,
    melted into my bed
    only to feel the lint
    buzz around my head.

    Buzzing into dull drone;
    worries left my heart alone.

    Looked up at the sky,
    I did cry,
    for the sun had bled.

    These blazing solar flares
    bleed like buzzing obsidian,
    Le soleil noir shines darkly,
    sweet fey-heart melting.

    Want for nothing
    All that's here was here before
    Nothing to want
    Hollow heart forevermore


    The strange abstract glow
    Shines beneath my mind
    Stretches across the sky
    Only to be seen by your eyes

    "It was all in my head,
    Until I felt a knock upon the door
    A feeling wanted to enter,
    Into the door of my soul,
    It entered with ease,
    But then washed over me,
    I drowned in complete ecstasy"
     
  10. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    one night i melted
    upon my bed,within the folds
    of dreams on skin,
    and heavy lint within this heart.
    one night again i melt
    melt on the bed.
    who will hold this buzz,
    this openeing to love.
    with vision pure .
    i shall melt once more...
    melt upon whos' bed.....


    thank you
    lovenpeace from saff
    just alittle something i added.....
     
  11. searching4nirvana

    searching4nirvana Member

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    a vision struck me
    and my thoughts did slide
    to long forgotten feelings
    i could not hide

    i sought to sing
    a song from my mind
    hoping the words
    i could not find
     
  12. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    But they were merely buried
    Statues forgotten, side by side
    Until the sun sweeps the earth
    And the universe collides

    ''I know your existance is out there''
    Cried an unheard feeling in a cave
    But then a rainbow crossed his forehead
    And he began to rave
     
  13. fleetwoodmack

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    Alone! I can't be alone!
    Not soley, lonely, only one.
    There must be another, a brother
    Under the skin, out there, somewhere.
     
  14. useless poet

    useless poet Member

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    One night i melted,
    melted into my bed,
    only to feel the lint,
    buzz around my head.

    Buzzing into dull drone,
    worries left my heart alone.

    Looked up at the sky,
    my heart did cry,
    for the sun had bled.

    These blazing solar flares
    bleed like buzzing obsidian
    le soleil noir shines darkly,
    sweet fey-heart melting.

    Want for nothing,
    All thats here was here before,
    nothing to want,
    hollow heart forevermore.

    The strange abstract glow,
    shines beneath my mind,
    stretches across the sky,
    only to be seen by your eyes.

    It was all in my head,
    until i felt a knock upon the door,
    a feeling wanted to enter,
    in to the door of my soul.
    It entered with ease,
    but then washed over me,
    i drowned in complete ecstasy"

    I no longer felt awkward and unwanted,
    and overwhelmed with sorrow.
    no more feeling ridiculed,
    like a poem among the shallow.
     
  15. But before the search began
    He needed to go to the loo
    And clutching his bladder he ran
    Soon outside he would glitter anew

    Out the door, rows of roses they lay
    With great haste he opened his fly
    He rejoiced as he let off a spray
    Eyes now turned to the starlit sky

    The night greeted him with its graces
    Shadow triumphed and light was now meek
    Seeking truth in the stars and the spaces
    They took sieze of his mind and started to speak:
     
  16. oh little man alone you are
    and alone forever you'll be
    don't waste time, don't waste breath go and phone the bar
    in the liquor you'll find you are free

    for an hour or two, as time could ensue
    a brother could well be at hand
    to lament and to sing as you swallow the brew
    once you're blind he will help you to stand
     
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