ten thousand embers three stiff crown and cokes and then we sparked flint, the blue propane flame torched a tangled kindling pile and the fire lept up, a tower, ten thousand embers high, and thick and crackling fury as glasses clinked in toast to its expanding canopy turned to ash, to snow, to carbon tears falling grey on floodlit flowerbeds around the corner, by the screened porch, where she stood, blurred, an outline I thought I knew but the movement wasn't right; way too smooth, with no trembling, no nervous glance around at the heat-lightning strobe within charcoal clouds and coming in like the wicked witch on a tumbling western typhoon, my cup dropped and the room, it's spinning, the room…
this time, distance has damned you.number's disconnected, an operator interruptionand the pit is black and bottomless. this pocket's too poor, anyway.can't conjure pedestals for your pirouettes anymore…replication failed to produce anything, you know, lavishly adornedwith destined forever-after, with cinderella polish. so, time's up. midnight, remember,returns your gorgon makeup, the pumpkin, the rags. the goddess… she’s gone away.
this is my fav.. i love the woven colours of life you use to describe your feelings lovenpeace from saff
Many wonderful images in this offering fulmah. I caught a buzz each time I read it. This quoted stanza, however, is a priceless gem. I love the easy flow of its alchemy.
I see through blurred vision, and all the outlines in my life are hazy with little distinction. A beautiful look into this phenomenon.