Tomorrow

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Moonjava, Jul 22, 2005.

  1. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Today I figured out
    That all you care about
    Is your good time
    As I sit on the sidelines
    I'm not your drug of choice anymore
    And every time I try
    I end up worse off than before
    So I'm done with you today
    And I'm throwing you away
    Not like you care
    But when tomorrow comes
    When you need someone to hold
    You'll lay in the bed you made
    And it will be freezing cold
    And you'll lay there shivering all alone
    How does it feel?
     
  2. warlock

    warlock Member

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    Thats a really well written poem MJ. It should be added to those books which are just filled with poems that you buy at bookstores.


    And to have your intials or name below it would be cool ! :cool:

    Having spoken to you and knowing how that poem came to be. Your words certainly come from your heart. Which makes it so great a poem.

    Just wish it hadn't come from the cost of part of your heart.

    Warlock
     
  3. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    This is an amzing piece of poetry,I especially like "I'm not your drug of choice anymore"
     
  4. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    hey man, i have been right there...mine looked for a new drug of choice and is now lonelier than ever. its right hard....this life.you know. nice.
     
  5. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Wow, I definitely thought this was one of my weaker pieces.
    So I'm surprised at all the positve responses. Thanx guys! Glad my little "rant" touched you. :)

    You're too kind. :) I guess life is for learning, right?
     
  6. warlock

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    Yeh true MJ. We learn from our mistakes and we grow from them.


    I know what its like to be hurt by a significant someone or person you liked. There certainly is no fun in it.

    Warlock
     
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