Breaking Up

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by babybud420, Jul 22, 2005.

  1. babybud420

    babybud420 Member

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    Ok, dont laugh...not that good at this....

    What do you do when you think he's the one,
    and you wake up in the morning and everythings gone?
    You breathe in the air of a perfect day,
    not realizing he doesn't feel the same way.
    That was the last day we were together,
    I thought our love could've lasted forever.
    But, as I look into your deep blue eyes,
    I knew our relationship had been filled with lies.
    Never again would I touch his face,
    or feel the love of his sweet embrace.
    I have a terrible pain deep in my heart,
    as if he'd reached inside and pulled it apart.
    I thought I'd feel his love for years,
    but now I only wipe away the tears.
    As I feel this awful pain,
    I sit in my room alone again.
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    this is so open
    you have to live
    grow with the path you have taken
    the pain will fade,but you will remember
    this and move on in time............


    yet sometimes a path taken may
    be the best thing that happened
    to you ,but only time will show its
    reasons....
    lovenpeace from saff

    i loved the words you wrote
    it flows like the sadness after
    any situation that changes.....
     
  3. babybud420

    babybud420 Member

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    Thank you. How are you?
     
  4. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    awww sweetie, i have felt the same pain too many times. poetry is a wonderful way to vent. And you're pretty good at it. :) Keep posting!!
    Love and healing
    --mj--
     
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