Care to share a smoke?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Davino, Jul 19, 2005.

  1. Davino

    Davino Member

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    Can I hold you once again
    I feel that this was planned
    something carries me
    thru the fields and to the sea

    So! sea me in your heart
    and love me do not stop
    the love is gushing forth
    wicked abandom on the porch

    can I hold you once more?
     
  2. Davino

    Davino Member

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    or remember the pheeling as you crept through the door of no return...
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    i liked your poem! was the second post like another way to end it? If so, I like the first one better, I think.
    --luv mj--
     
  4. Davino

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    I think it could be the next segment, I sometimes write in spurts. Help me write it!
     
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