Sunday Blues

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bedlam, Jul 9, 2005.

  1. bedlam

    bedlam Senior Member

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    Laying there alone
    silence in the room
    surrounding noise deafening
    the rain is pelting down.

    Where did the sun
    suddenly run away to,
    has it fallen
    from grace with you?

    Patterns in the sand
    of where we went
    now go in circles
    surrounding my head.

    Words were whispered
    close to you
    sharing secrets honestly
    from a heart that bled.

    Droplets now are falling
    as clouds loom, overhead
    drowning in the sadness
    of what was really said.

    Where did the sun hide
    it was here, inside me
    shining like a beacon
    it was my only guide.

    Patterns in the sand
    turn to swollen streams
    finally engulfing me
    drowning within my head.
     
  2. Shampoo

    Shampoo Banned

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    this is a very motivating poem, i love it
     
  3. SLammon420

    SLammon420 Senior Member

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    nice poem...oh and shampoo...how did you come up with your name...shampoo?
     
  4. HippieAngelMom

    HippieAngelMom Member

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    wow, good one
     
  5. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    I love it.
     

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