A Story at 4 am. (see if you've ever heard this one...)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Jun 24, 2004.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    In the full victory of forgetting

    the distance rethinks itself,
    and silence
    covers the ocean with clovers.

    a young boy
    picks up the night of spirals

    and into his pocket of pure silver,
    he places five tired swords
    and a dawn in pieces...
     
  2. KittenX

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    I've never heard this, but I liked it.
     
  3. skyfire

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    those lines were awesome...
     
  4. Fierce_Flawless

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    "and silence
    covers the ocean with clovers"

    beautious.
     
  5. ripple23

    ripple23 Member

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    thank you!
     
  6. littleskinny

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    I like very much - lovely lovely
     
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