O.k. I'm the songwriter in my band, so I have alot of songs. It's not that good, but, I'd like some honest criticsm. So, here goes. Verse 1: Bursts of light dance around my head, The technicolor light show, makes my body feel like lead, Trying to get out anyway they can, As I sit there while my body thurns to sand. Verse 2: Laughing and smiling when my tongue melts into thin air My body evaporates, but I haven’t a care, Looking up at the spangled wall, If I dare to move, I know I will fall. Cosmic waves flow through my brain, Making sure I never think the same, Rainbow colors pass through my brain, Colors abstract, never plain, As the faint smell of flowers fills the air. Verse 3: The brightness, lord, it blinds my eyes, Spaceship moonbeams, fireflies, The pain is numbed as I watch the show, White sensation freezes my brain like snow Verse 4: Waiting in the room for all eternity, Sitting there in psychedelic simplicity, Rotting away from liquid bliss, Knowing my chances of life are hit and miss. Cosmic waves flow through my brain, Making sure I never think the same, Rainbow colors pass through my brain, Colors abstract, never plain, As the faint smell of flowers fills the air. Bridge: Seeing what’s really inside my mind, Discovering what I could never before find, Wash away my depression, feelings of despair, For the faint smell of flowers will fill the air.
