Bastard Daddy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by HippieAngelMom, Jun 26, 2005.

  1. HippieAngelMom

    HippieAngelMom Member

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    Im 13 and this is what I think of my dad......



    Little girl dying inside
    your words filled with rage, anger and hate..
    you don't listen or see the inside of me,
    the one trying to contain her beauty within
    you only make things worse..
    see me for who I am, not what u want to make me
    every time you say a word, u crush a part of my mind
    your blood pumps in mine but its a different color
    meet me half way:$

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    Peace out!
     
  2. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    give the guy break huh, its realy tough to try and guide a daughter in this age,
    be patient with him he'll learn in time
     
  3. IronGoth

    IronGoth Newbie

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    Move out and get a job while you still know everything.

    You know what, sorry, I think the poster is totally dead on. That mean old daddy, telling her she can't stay out til 3 am with guys she doesn't know, can't smoke in the house, can't get drunk with friends or wear makeup. And he expects her to do HOMEWORK!

    OMG

    Just for ONE DAY I think the world should be run by thirteen year old girls. By noon the place'd be in flames. BUT WE WOULD ALL BE SO SO MATURE.
     
  4. HippieAngelMom

    HippieAngelMom Member

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    Actually my dad doenst live with me. He doesnt ask what grades I get, or what sports I'm in, or who my best friends are. He hasnt told me he loves me since I was 3. I only wish he would know I drink and smoke, so he could yell at me, and tell me I'm fucking up my life.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Little girl dying inside.

    Your words filled
    with rage, anger and hate...

    You don't listen
    or see, the inside of me,
    the one trying to contain
    her beauty within.

    You only make things worse...

    See me for who I am,
    not what u
    want to make me.

    Every time you say a word,
    u crush a part of my mind!

    Your blood pumps,
    in mine,
    but its a different color.

    Meet me half way?


    ~*
    This is what is saw in your poem.
    The essence is great, just needs
    more space to breathe.

    "My thoughts are fragile,
    like the wings of a butterfly,
    your words blow them to pieces."

    Peace & Bright Blessings ~*
     
  6. HippieAngelMom

    HippieAngelMom Member

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    Thankyou kittens :p
     
  7. TheLizardKingMike

    TheLizardKingMike Members

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    This piece is full of self expression. And that is what art is about. Good job
     

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