Help me

I am working on a site www.bluemtnhippie.com check it out and leave feedback

 

ok..soo..what is it that you sell?

 

very vague...i think you need some details there buddy

 

i agree with the both of you. it needs more stuff on it.

 

The best advise I have heard about comercial websites is "show them the bananna." Think of your audience as a monkey looking for a bananna, if the monkey doesn't see it quickly, the monkey goes away. The bananna, or a quick route to it, should be the first thing they see.