pitch black

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LuMpYtRiChOmEy, Jul 1, 2005.

  1. LuMpYtRiChOmEy

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    a lonely face i see tonight,

    it leaves me with a big fright,

    it's a black shadow in a nights breeze,

    i feel like i'm going to freeze,

    when i see this face again,

    my whole life will start over,

    where it began
     
  2. LuMpYtRiChOmEy

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    i love this poem its so dark
     
  3. Lotus Butterfly

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    Cool. What was the inspiration?
     
  4. Rafaela

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    I would think a mirror
     
  5. wiggy

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    wow thats a good one, its dark but good!!!!
     
  6. LuMpYtRiChOmEy

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    Hey Howya doin everyone :) . That was a sample of my grandaughters poetry. She spent the week or so and I figured it would be ok for her to use the Hip Forrums. I showed her the joint and she liked it and we got her own account so when she comes over she'l be logged on as Gabby. Thanks to the Hip Forrums for providin a good wholesome place for her to check :) ! Annyhow, she spends time over here and schools out so youl prolly be hearin from her more often. Annyhow, Lumpys Lumpy again :) . Youl find more of Gabbys poetry and insights tho whenever she's over. Now I just came up with another Hiku so Im gonna post a Hiku. Blessins
     
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