Thoughts of deepness, now awakened Virginity gone, yet still untaken It moves so fast yet is motionless It dreams and thinks but cannot cry It sleeps and there come no dreams It tells a story but does not speak It breathes and roams but does not move It is dishonest about its truth It tells the truth about its lies It has no shame yet its head still hangs It can not breathe but still it sighs Is very smart but still its dense This thing of my dreams it makes no sense
I don't see where you're going with this. Also, you say "it dreams and thinks but cannot cry" then in the next line says it doesn't dream. On a positive note, this would probably sound pretty good if you could work it into a rhyming poem. Good rhythm on it too.