sum more poetree

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by the_drifter, Jun 30, 2005.

  1. the_drifter

    the_drifter Member

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    AFTER THE FALL, PROTRACTION REBORED MY COMATOSE. WHEN IN WAITING FOR SLEEPING MINDS TO RELFECT A SIGN OF CIRCULATION, INTELLECT (FROM THE DEEPEST DEPTHS) SWARMS THROUGH WHATS STILL (MY CONSUMPTION). A BEAUTIFULLY PLANNED CAPTURE. A DRIFTER, SO TIMELESSLY, DRAGS MY HOLLOWED BODY TO ITS DEATH. OF EYES IN WAKE, A TIMELESS IDENTITY. WHEN PROPHECIZEING NIGHT, DRAWS A TRUTH; WE’RE NON-BELIEVING. IN STILL, IT BEATS TO WAIT IN TOMBS OF LIFELESSNESS UNTIL A PLACE OF Stagnation.



    FOREVER

     
  2. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    the FOREVER made me laugh

    i like it but put it in stanzas, your rebellion just makes it harder to read
     

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