A Chronicle of Philosophy and Observation

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TechnoSpider, Jun 29, 2005.

  1. TechnoSpider

    TechnoSpider Member

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    A Chronicle of Philosophy and Observation

    Contemplation rides the breeze
    A passing river of breath.

    Tomorrow perches on the horizon
    Waiting for its accompaniment:
    Small songs which fade without motion.
    Held and stilled by memory.

    Constraints may bend and break
    with the persistence of thought
    arising from a single world of transience.

    And then the soft wind moves on.


     
  2. Zion

    Zion Member

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    Yeah man, There is a natural mystic blowing through the air, It seems like you listen carefully so you will hear
     
  3. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    Nice work. Beautiful phrasing, lovely reflections. Enjoyed it!
     
  4. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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    not overly my kind of poem i must say, but it has a certain flow i'll be honest. i dont think it overly expressed much. however thinking about it, i guess its a clever title and a clever poem...more to it than first meets the eye :)

    good choice of name also:)
     
  5. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    i like it a lot, beautiful, love the images i get from it. Sort of fits my mood perfectly right now. :)
     
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