Kaliedescope Reality

liquid blue kaliedescope dreams
i would journey into the colors of your mind
i could make you feel good
i could make you feel bad
but i always made you feel
we were wise beyond our years
guitar and harmonica hippies
my soul had a vision
but now it is blurred
like photographs in the rain
even the lightning was hypnotized by my eyes
and the thunder welcomed my touch
your voice was my pulse
vibrating through my veins
tempting my senses
sustaining the life of my desire
i wanted to be your goddess
i could have made you immortal

 

hey,enjoyed this one dude much love!

 

groovey title man(sorry just had too add that)

 

I enjoyed the detailed imagery. My favorite part was "guitar and harmonica hippies" i think it was. keep that pen moving! xxx

 

I think is great.

 

talk about lines you read and wish you had written! that pair of lines with the lightning and the thunder! damn!

 

ha...that's great...u just made my day...thanx!

thanx all...

 

Love the poem!
Keep up the good work!

 

thank you...love ur sig btw...

 

superb image!

And the last line is excellent too! Love love love.

 

thanx skinny...

 

i liked it, i liked the "but i always made you feel"