take me there again

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by *peace*child*, Jun 26, 2005.

  1. *peace*child*

    *peace*child* Member

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    Yes, I remember the times...
    late nights when I'd stay with you
    holding your hand
    we'd talk nervously of unimportant things.
    I remember our first kiss...
    I remember your eyes...
    to this day the memories spark an energy through me.
    With you I feel beautiful.
    Despite my troubles,
    my pain,
    my scattered thoughts,
    despite my dissatisfactions
    and my petty angst
    your voice can make me smile.
    Just a stout, perky "hey"
    fills me with an indescribable euphoria.
    I wish, sometimes, that I could tell you all this
    That I could just release my feelings
    and maybe you would tell me you love me...
    but the fear of the opposite holds me back.
    You're the world to me...
    I can't get you out of my mind.
    Everyday I pass the places we've been
    I get taken back
    I get lost...
    take me there again, oh please...
    I'd die for you...
    please...
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Nice poem. I can really relate to the feelings expressed here. You did a beautiful job of putting the feelings of desperate love into words. *snaps*
     
  3. HippieAngelMom

    HippieAngelMom Member

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    I like this one, cool beans...
     
  4. HippieAngelMom

    HippieAngelMom Member

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    The best nipple is always the third!!!
    Like the triple nipple of the Coriander bird!!!
    Two's company; three's a crowd!!!
    But I bet that third one makes you proud!!!
    Where's that nipple, by the way!!!
    Up top, below, or can't you say!!!
    If I had three, know what I'd do!!!
    I'd pierce it through to the other two!!!
    Suzy, Suzy, Suzy, Suzy
    Suzy, Suzy Greenberg
    Suzy, Suzy, Suzy, Suzy
    Suzy, Suzy Greenberg
     
  5. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    I lvoe this,it's exactly what I want to write to my boyfriend,amazing
     

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