I'm Amy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Jun 22, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i'm amy and i'm 5 WHOLE years old.

    mummy, why do you cry when you touch my cheek?
    mummy why does it hurt when i push down here?
    why do you weep mummy?

    daddy, why do you frown at the doctors lounge?
    daddy, why do you yell when you have to go home?
    why are you angry daddy?

    boy from school, why do you stand there awkwardly,
    with your dirty daisy in your hand?
    why don't i understand,
    boy from school?

    bestest friend Freya, why is your laugh too high?
    why is the sky the limit in your eyes?
    where is the friendship chain now?
    did you lose it?

    nurses, why do you look that way at me,
    like i'm some sort of sick...puppy?
    why do the doctors look so serious,
    every time they inject me with morphine?
    every time i.fall.asleep...
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    thought i'd better explain this maybe...tis about a girl who's dying and she's been told she can't play with her toys and stuff so basically she's writing a diary sorta thing. her parents are really worried, she doesn't understand though. she also has a naive personality..she's mentally behind the people of her age as well.
     
  3. Necronizer

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    Do this girl is diabetic? Mmmmmm Very well poem at first i was thinking that is about a familiar problems and the consecuenses of the divorce but i understand in the part of the hospital pretty good 4 Stars!!!
     
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