Sacred

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Jun 24, 2005.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wrote this a couple years ago, enjoy.

    Sacred

    O holy of the sacred lands
    You tree of life and spirit hands
    Who judges not the pilgrim’s face
    But sheds the light of mystic grace

    In swirling clouds your wisdom shed
    To souls long trapped by ego's dread
    Your air to breathe puts death behind
    A gift to those of ready mind

    You gods of wisdom doth require
    Nothing for these gifts inspired
    An essence sacred brought to Earth
    A seed of grace to end the dearth

    So with reverence I bow to you
    My soul to soar within the blue
    And on your wings shall ride the light
    To leave behind the world of night
     
  2. stranger

    stranger Member

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    niiiiiiiiiiiiice. i always liked your posts and sensed you had somethin in you, but DAMN, that is some good stuff.
     
  3. Daniel Herring

    Daniel Herring Member

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    A point for that one.
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    thanks guys :)
     
  5. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    whoa, i'm very impressed. it flows and has a lot of substance. cheers!
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Well done. Beautiful and subtle images.
     
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