Creation and Destruction of Time

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tripRBYday, Jun 23, 2004.

  1. tripRBYday

    tripRBYday Member

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    PART ONE

    The sun seemingly present present
    before the beginning
    of time.
    Becoming an attraction for this wandering mind.

    On this day,
    created by man,
    stealing the beauty.
    Captured by
    the constant locomotion
    of darkness
    throughout the land.

    Now He cheapens
    what was once left
    of simplicity.
    Making a calender
    and taking the parity
    of man.

    PART TWO

    I came from the moon,
    as an illumination,
    not to be affected
    by this thing called
    TIME.

    As the moon I see
    the true allure
    of man toward the sun.
    Hence creating
    this thing called time.

    What has it done?
    but destoy the Times
    you could have had,
    from picking up your writing pad.
    nothing has come from
    this thing called
    TIME

    perhaps because it is a
    FRAME OF MIND.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Unique and interesting. I liked Part II a lot...
     
  3. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Agree with Kitten...this is great. Very fond of:


     
  4. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    and i am going to agree w/ skinny...i liked that part the best too...very nice...
     
  5. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Nice work! And yes, time is a frame of mind.:)
     
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