Untitled (So you come)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SvgGrdnBeauty, Jun 22, 2004.

  1. SvgGrdnBeauty

    SvgGrdnBeauty only connect

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    Untitled (So You Come)

    Beautiful child
    Like summer rain
    I know you seek peace
    So you come

    Beautiful child
    With corn silk hair
    The love has drawn you in
    So you come

    Darling angel
    I've seen your face before
    I have seen it in my dreams
    But now you have come

    Flower princess
    Innocent child
    On your light and sweet lotus feet
    You have come
     
    SvgGrdnBeauty, Jun 22, 2004
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  3. tripRBYday

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    It was alright, some good words but doesn't flow verry well.
     
    tripRBYday, Jun 23, 2004
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  5. Acid_Rain

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    i liked it, but i think it didn't run together as well as it could have
     
    Acid_Rain, Jun 23, 2004
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