Can you help me write a mission statement by monday?

It must be a personal one. Here is what I have so far.

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I have many goals I wish to accomplish in the upcoming years. Within the next half year I plan on attending drivers education and getting my license along with a car. Some time in the next two years I plan on graduating and attending college with majors in English and biology. I will pay for everything I plan on achieving and receiving mainly by myself, my parents, loans and maybe a scholarship.
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I would like to at lesat double in size and content what I hve written above.

Any advice on what to write?

 

Is this paper being graded for content, or spelling and grammer? I made a few changes in the text that you have to make it closer to grammaticly correct. The word "plan" is used in two sentences in a row, so you might want to change one of them. Check on comma rules. Instead of using the word "and" your thoughts could be written is different sentences. This will look better, and it makes it easy to read.

It looks like your off to a good start. Maybe you could explain why you want a good education, or where that education might take you. How about writing about how getting a car and license will help you in college?

I'll check back later to see how this paper is going. My winter job is teaching technical writting - Which is funny because I can't type or spell.

 

thanks...ill addd my changes like tomorrow or something.

 

Since there is only 2 weeks of school left i don't even care about my grade so i rushed and this is what i wrote:

Nicole
Mission Statement
June 5, 2005

I have many goals I wish to accomplish in the upcoming years. Within the next half year, I plan on attending drivers education, and getting my license along with a car. Getting my licence and a car will help me with college because I will always have a ride. Some time in the next two years, I plan on graduating, and then attending college with majors in English and biology. I want to go to college and receive a good education because, “the more you know the further you go.” I will pay for everything by achieving and receiving loans and maybe a scholarship. My higher education will lead me through life. I would like to become either an English teacher or an environmental marketer. After I find a husband and am settled down with a stable job I will then consider having children. I will always keep in mind that life never goes according to plan and I will remain flexible to that thought.

 

A mission statement really should be as short as possible. For example, my cat gets prescription food. On the bottom of the bag it reads, " Our mission is to help enrich and lengthen the special relationjships between people and their pets." (Hill's Prescription Diet)