Good Day.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Meeshka Chaukinov, Jun 20, 2004.

  1. Meeshka Chaukinov

    Meeshka Chaukinov Senior Member

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    good morning. pull the blinds
    sip my cup of java
    sun shines though on my glass table
    palm leaves rustle in the wind
    laughter in the distance
    the multiplatinum soundtrack to paradise

    the corona is fully visible

    good evening. open the blinds.
    flip through my Readers Digest
    talking faces litter my living room
    inked tales of heroes in my hands
    moving images of deserts in the box
    the platinum selling soundtrack to life

    the corona is shifting

    good morning. go outside
    sniff the salty atmosphere
    watch the red lights go flying by
    sirens blare into the wind
    smoke off in the distance
    the gold selling soundtrack to unpleasantries

    the corona is leaving
    the eclipse is ending

    good morning. flip on the tele.
    look at the weather guys unhappy face
    watch the lightning flash in the distace
    channel 6, our newest murder
    channel 11, new epidemic
    a huge pop, and then static.
    pounding hailstones against your window
    the chart flop soundtrack to hell

    the sun is shining brightly
     
  2. tripRBYday

    tripRBYday Member

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    i personally haven't read any poetry such as yourself writes. It is about eveyday life, everyday actions,and it seems to me how repetitive life can be. Good one.
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I really enjoyed this; creative, fresh, stylistic and richly visual.
     
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