a poem from the names of poetry posters

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by skyfire, Jun 22, 2004.

  1. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    hey...took a bunch of the names (or parts of names) of ppl who have posted poetry in here and wrote a poem...see what u think...is your name used? sorry if anyone didnt want their name used...maybe i should have asked first?
    oh well...here it is...

    we may be fierce
    but not flawless
    and our voices only a ripple
    across the sky
    on fire with acid rain
    i've seen angels on earth
    some with raven hair
    and once in a while
    the maples in the mist
    look like moon beams
    spyders wove webs of hemp
    as the princess became a silent concubine
    in a shadow of the sun
    her grey eyes heavy
    like the willow
    her pure innocence being compromised
    by moon light delerium
    she remains unforgiven
    and the star gate keeper
    tangled up in blue
    left us to our pointless wandering...
     
  2. lunaluvcat

    lunaluvcat Member

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    Holy crap! That was so incredibly amazing! You talent is pure beauty!
     
  3. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    ha...well...i dont know about that...but thank you
     
  4. tripRBYday

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    Your imagery creates quite a platform for your poetry, if that's your style we have something in common, we have something in common indeed
     
  5. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    that was brilliant!! i wish i would have thought of that, but i couldn't pull it off like you did- and i got to be first!!! :D

    this part's my favorite- willow simply exudes poetry:

    like the willow
    her pure innocence being compromised
    by moon light delerium
     
  6. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    :rolleyes: No Skinny Kittens then....
     
  7. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Oh the injustice of life! :sunglasse :(
     
  8. Acid_Rain

    Acid_Rain Member

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    that was awesome! and very creative
     
  9. skyfire

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    sorry skinny and kitten...i tried using ur names...trust me i did, but they just didnt fit...maybe i will have to write another...
     
  10. Defence_mechanism

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  11. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Tee hee...sok . write another anyway!!
     
  12. skyfire

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    maybe...we'll see what pops into mind...
     
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