UNKNOWN LAND- my first one on here

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by melanie evelyn, Jun 12, 2005.

  1. melanie evelyn

    melanie evelyn Member

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    this is my first poem on here, so yeah anyway hope you all like it

    UNKNOWN LAND
    the land thats deep inside my soul
    will keep me going on
    a life of which im never told
    i dont allow myself such fun
    a fantasy thats never shown
    but yet i still go on
    a life of which i've never known
    i dont deserve such fun
    a world free from judgement
    and all its hidden pain
    we shall not have have poverty, nor riches and no fame
    we'll live in peace until we die
    oh how i wish its true
    we'll never know what love was like
    together me and you

    not that good, but i thought that i would have a shot anyway
    melanie xxx ooo
     
  2. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    I thought it was that good :).
     
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