death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by grimmo02, Jun 9, 2005.

  1. grimmo02

    grimmo02 Member

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    pipe dreams
    chantruse pictures
    demons eating my soul
    alone...
    alone for eternity
    until death
    death of the mind
    body
    soul
    of humanity
    of mankind
    torn memories
    falling from the sky
    like diamonds
    flowing on and on and on...
     
  2. Necronizer

    Necronizer Member

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    Groovy But it seems that the death its not like this this its more than an Sphisque death i like it in fact
     
  3. grimmo02

    grimmo02 Member

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    thanx for the input, and i agree, it doesn't seem like death is right for the title, but i couldn't find a more fitting title. i am better at writing them than naming them.
     

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