fly...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Jun 9, 2005.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

    Messages:
    848
    Likes Received:
    0
    another poem for all
    who feel life within this earth..


    so tepid ,now this wild ocean
    with memories floating,rolling
    over ,on.
    not like the tender, luke warm
    seas with filtered,torn moments.
    forgoten memories.
    so soft,with the sting ,salted
    waves ,tears will fall upon..
    my body crumpled,licked
    from dry tongues within.
    forbiden moments,coming
    here... haunting echos.
    we all hear..
    shall we fly ,upon the wild
    winds.to follow lovers ,passing
    by...
    oh, moan love.. shall i crave more..
    wings of passion, flames that
    dance.for all....


    thank you for reading
    lovenpeace from saff

    be whole love life unity...to all
     
  2. Necronizer

    Necronizer Member

    Messages:
    21
    Likes Received:
    0
    oh, moan love.. shall i crave more..
    wings of passion, flames that
    dance.for all....
    ______________________________

    I think the flames dance for you inside your mind, Your poem Its like a Proyection of some act you did in the past Mmmmm obviously thats the way i catched if im wrong tell me plz, I like it much Good Writer Peace&Love.....
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

    Messages:
    1,074
    Likes Received:
    0
    "forbiden moments,coming"

    That is what forbidden moments do. And hence, forward may we go (d).
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    Messages:
    6,514
    Likes Received:
    4
    Your punctuation confuses me sometimes, but I really liked this one. Very beautiful, great job.
     
  5. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

    Messages:
    848
    Likes Received:
    0
    hi there

    thank you all for reading

    yes its all about how i see this life
    from the first memory
    the first reason i had....
    and the first moment i reacted..
    how i felt about all i have managerd to
    do so far, and all i have not done .......

    thank you all for reading this again
    to see within the feeling is very understanding....
    lovenpeace from saff
     
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice