"Bleeding For you"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bryanford87, Jun 9, 2005.

  1. bryanford87

    bryanford87 Member

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    I can't keep bleeding for you
    You don't know what it makes me do
    All these things you put me through
    I stick up for you and take the blame
    You give me a bad name
    I could be everything
    But i am nothing
    just so you can be something
    i need to fade out
    i neede to phase through
    i need to become something new
    i gotta stop bleeding for you
     
  2. Necronizer

    Necronizer Member

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    You need to put more enfasis in your write. Its good but you can put more cream on the tacos....
     
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