in the desert, we think most clearly- please tell me wat u think!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mrsmorrison27, Jun 3, 2005.

  1. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    What we don't know can only save us from the truth.
    I can hear you screaming through your face
    Your misplaced words have been trampled under the feet of dancing women
    Open up your mind to the strange
    the rejected
    the deranged
    To the obscene illusions you see in the night sky
    Wild people dancing for what seems to be no purpose
    They will let you in
    You only have to ask
    Here we sing the songs of the ancients
    naked
    around wild maniacle fires disguised as dancing and chanting
    Women, screaming, their hair tangled
    their bodies bair only with paintings and words of our tale
    We want the truth, we know it's there.
    we want it even if they say it's ugly, unpleasent, unhuman,
    we want to see.
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    oh, man, me-nads,
    burning, bacchantic!
     
  3. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    wicked... ecstatic...
     
  4. Necronizer

    Necronizer Member

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    Wow Sick Sad World!!!! (You guys should see Daria)
    I like your poem its the expresion of your toughs about the society and how it works and how its your roll there, sometimes it seems that you dont fits well i think thats the message of your poem good work
     
  5. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    These lines hit me just right and made me smile.

    To the obscene illusions you see in the night sky
    Wild people dancing for what seems to be no purpose
    They will let you in
    You only have to ask
     
  6. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    The Mystery of Filth.
     
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