The first rain of june falls, like cold black pearls, dotting my skin with droplets. The grass, bark and earth forms a slick spongy bed, to kiss my seated observations. Crystal spheres glisten, pendulous on each needle, arousing the pines darkness. Nature, an immanent empress, demands naked rationality and hardened simplicity. Her moisture penetrates, feeding hoary swollen roots, under the verdant moss; While steady downpours wash away the notion of being a sheltered witness. Purifying in its equality, all is saturated under a cloud-laden sky.
Beautifully put but I'm still sick and tarred of rain and cloudy days here, lol!! Black pearl rainy days Strewn together Only to be worn on my soul Wrapping the cloudy days around me like a shabby cloak Waiting for my sunsoaked shining tiara to unfurl my brow
"Nature, an immanent empress, demands naked rationality and hardened simplicity. Her moisture penetrates, feeding hoary swollen roots, under the verdant moss;" I loved this. My favorite lines.
pfft~ sylvan's is lovely, mines just a polite commentary instead of saying... "rain!!fockfockfock stopit already damnit!!"
I like the way you show the yard of your home hehehehe kida Beatifull I like the form of how you played with the words and how were used as example Of your cotidian enviorement and your Consciensunes (sorry for the last word *Learning English*) Truly Interesting
