Mentally Cold

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by "†"»AMBER«, Jun 1, 2005.

  1. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    Have you ever cried a sea
    because of who your thinking of
    and all that it could be?
    Have you ever said good-bye cuz
    it hurt each time to leave.
    Did you ever walk away because
    it hurt so good to stay.
    How could something so devious
    be so pure?
    How could something so poisonous
    be the final cure?
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    this is very moving in ways
    you may not know yet.....

    if it hurt each time you leave....


    this is a great line...

    yes i have cried oceans
    i have drawned in tears beyond
    control.
    and felt the wounds upon my heart
    too many times for my head to
    understand.
    yet i learned more than how to swim...
    more of how we are all looking
    for the same thing
    love...peace of mind ,happy soul.

    thank you for this poem
    it made me smile at the point
    of tears rolling..........

    lovenpeace from saff

    be whole take care of your heart .......
     
  3. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    Thank you. Im glad ur moved by my writing!
     
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