Dont think me unkind words are hard to find. They're only cheques i've left unsigned From the banks of choas in my mind And when there eloquence escapes me There logic ties me up and rapes me All I want to say to you My Innocence will pull me through All i want to say is "I love You' and this is true. Poets, Priest and Politicans have words of thanks There postioned words that scream for your submission and Someones jamming out there tranision. ' Cos when there eloquence escapes you the logic will rape you.
lol... I like your rhyme structure... could be a song if you wanted it to. ' Cos when there eloquence escapes you the logic will rape you. that was my fave part... it's true, nice observation