Understand?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by "†"»AMBER«, May 31, 2005.

  1. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    Dont think me unkind
    words are hard to find.
    They're only cheques i've
    left unsigned
    From the banks of choas in
    my mind
    And when there eloquence
    escapes me
    There logic ties me up and
    rapes me
    All I want to say to you
    My Innocence will pull me
    through
    All i want to say is
    "I love You'
    and this is true.
    Poets, Priest and Politicans
    have words of thanks
    There postioned words that
    scream for your submission and
    Someones jamming out there
    tranision.
    ' Cos when there eloquence
    escapes you
    the logic will rape you.
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    This is my favorite part. :) *thumbs up*
     
  3. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    lol... I like your rhyme structure... could be a song if you wanted it to.

    ' Cos when there eloquence
    escapes you
    the logic will rape you.

    that was my fave part... it's true, nice observation
     
  4. roly

    roly Senior Member

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    i like the rape bits...not coz im sick...but coz they put across a good image
     
  5. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    Thank you guys for the comments.
     
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