Just Wondering

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by "†"»AMBER«, May 31, 2005.

  1. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    What you dont know cant hurt
    yet when you find out you feel like
    dirt.
    You keep on denying it
    yet in my heart you knew I knew it.
    I look around
    and you have been everywhere in this town
    you cheated, you lied, yet YOU always wanted me to
    confied.
    You messed with my mind.
    The real truth I strive to find.
    You play games with everyone and
    you know the damage is done.
    WE are not the same
    I feel as if your playing a game.
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    awww Amber! Is this about Brent?
     
  3. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    I enjoyed the brazenness of your rhyming "hurt" with "dirt"... you're really sticking it out there :)
     
  4. "†"»AMBER«

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    Thanks for the comments hehe
     
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