Season of Confusion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by "†"»AMBER«, May 26, 2005.

  1. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    I wrote this for my friend who I absolutely love but sadly hes married :(.

    Numb to know
    Desperate to think
    Lost in a Season of Confusion by you
    Wanting your touch
    Needing you so much
    Hurt by the truth
    Scared from lies
    Out of tears from all the selfish crys
    Loving you to death is
    so much unwanted stress.
    And even changing our ways wouldnt
    be the best.
    Numb to thought
    & Desperate to know
    Lost in a Season of Confusion
    all because of you.
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    what a lovely way to say you understand
    it will never be..

    yet you long for love
    long to know happiness with another

    keep writing to overcome this movement
    of realization.....

    lovenpeace from saff

    sometimes love comes to us
    before we see who the lover is
    look past this man
    to find someone for yourself...
     
  3. "†"»AMBER«

    "†"»AMBER« Member

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    awe thank you!!
     
  4. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    I think saff is right, amber. I really enjoyed your poem! I felt a lot of the emotion that you poured into it. :) good job.
     
  5. naomi08

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    luv ur poem
     
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