The Friendship Hoax

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RiderOnTheStorm, May 21, 2005.

  1. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    In life there's nothing better
    Than finding true friendship along the way
    Air is cleaner, water is wetter
    Things only improve with each passing day

    I'm not a poet or a writer at all
    And this is kind of a hoax
    And down to the floor I do fall
    When I hear their light-hearted jokes

    So here's to the best set of chaps you could meet
    Forgive me for writing this piss
    I'm so glad I know both of you freaks
    I'm talking about Chrome and The Wiz.

    lol. I know it's terrible - I never could write poetry to save my life, but I met those two today and honestly, they're two of the nicest, friendliest, most wonderful people I've ever come across. Thanks for brightening up my life with some of your special sunshine, guys!
     
  2. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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    haha, ok i've got one or two points....

    loved the poem, its funny, but also serious, and very nicely balenced between the two, kinda gives me a rising kind of warm feeling...i like it, you very much are a poet

    also i love your signature, two reasons, firstly the nakedness...*ahem* and also that i love that ginsberg poem!

    also i checked out your gallery...and umm that was pleasent also :)
     
  3. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    Wow. Thank you. That was unexpected, but very much appreciated. As for my gallery half of it is coming down within 24 hours. About 85% of the first page, anyway. LoL. And yes, "America" is a fantastic poem.
     
  4. hippychrome

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    He he, hiya there and thankyou lol. Hey, you put a load of fun into my day too ha ha, ( well night now lol ). Awww, still gonna take some of them down aye? Oh well lol. And hey, there's nowt wrong with your poetry :) . you're poetry in motion itself ;)
     
  5. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    What time is it over there? It's early evening here. And I brightened up your day? You have it wrong way around! If it wasn't for you and Wizzy (especially you ;) ) I'd have been bored out of my skull. It was a blast posting and posing. I'm embarrassed now, actually. I TOTALLY didn't think you would read this... Haven't I blushed enough today?!

    Thanks again. XOXO
     
  6. hippychrome

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    He he, you have no idea of how sneaky I can be and where I get around ;). Its 10:27PM over here lol. Hey, no need to be embarrassed, you are a real charmer and cute with it ;). I'm on and off but will be back, prob in the galleries to kiss ya all over he he ;)
     
  7. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    I'm shivering with antici...................


    Someone better supply the call back, LOL....
     
  8. hippychrome

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    Pation :p . Hows that for a delay ;) . Patience is a vertue.. lunch time double so :)
     
  9. RiderOnTheStorm

    RiderOnTheStorm Butters!!

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    Always here for you.
     
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