when i say your my lifeline what does it mean? do you breathe air into my lungs? do you control my heart beat? do you? are you in control? are you ruling over mind body and soul? are you me? am i yours? are we forever intertwined? for all i have belongs to you and all you are is mine. life line dont leave my side,you sustain me/build me/hold me.i need you/breathe you/never flee from you whether down or high. your my everything and i...and i... im your sister/im your soul/im your neverending never failing hope and rock and all...am i? are we?? will we always be? so amazing how we ran through it all, big or small, standing tall conquering all facing giants with hands so weak yet strong in confidence and stride, we took our time to know our love, yet it happend so fast, we bonded/hand to glove, fitting so perfectly/meant to be, yet unique in everything . we are...we are...so different yet it fits/it works/its strong and unfailing. a bond so secure i will never feel lost again. no matter how far my physical self runs from you my heart is tied so strong with superglue. you are my all my all my all i will never lose you, and you me my angel/my soul/my all my all. and from the start we grew day by day, similarly in voice and belief and truth and now all we say is the same, the same, the same i hear your voice and im saved, i hear your truth and i cant hide/i cant kid myself, i know you know me inside out/theres no lies/no pretence/no finding out. its all there, all there on surface, you know me...you breathe me, without saying a word you soothe me. i love you i love you, theres noone above you, my everything/my life/my hope/my strength...there will never be an end and in despair i find you there kneeling by my side holding me caring, staring back at me with words so soft and true and i could never fall/i could never leave/i could never lose , my one reason for life is you, is you is you.
thats really intensely beautiful luchi.. i really really enjoyed reading it, i was completely swept away with the emotion.... just.. so.. beautiful.. - keep using that word but it truely is!
wow..thanks dandy...im really glad you like it!ive written so much about flo in the past but can never capture it you know? i dont even think this does really..but i do think it captures some of the emotion..thats why i wrote it kinda...spoken word styley...so it flowed greater, like thoughts pouring onto a page...feelings are so hard to express in words!!
i love cornwall and miss it all the time..but i dont think i could live there again..i duno..maybe when im a bit older, id love to bring up children there but right now..its not the place for me i think freeflow is my artistic excuse for not knowing how to write poetry!! lol
"like thoughts pouring onto a page...feelings are so hard to express in words!!" deffinatly the feeling i got from it... really good!
