A poem I wrote

Discussion in 'Bare It! Nudism and Naturism' started by TrippinBTM, May 9, 2005.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    The Barefooter's Dilemma

    Where once the grass grew green and fair
    A road of pain and concrete steers
    And feet once free to feel the air
    In darkness rot throughout the years

    With leather chains our toes we bind
    Deforming feet and strides alike
    For streets be to our feet unkind
    Too rough and harsh for us to hike

    And woe to those unshod instead
    Who stride against the status quo
    For though their feet do lightly tread
    The shackled ones no mercy show

    Insisting on their mindless rules
    So lound they squeal in fear of glass
    But suchly do they live as fools
    And miss the feel of toes in grass

    And so the earth calls to our soles
    In subtle tones of grass and sand
    But only he who barefoot strolls
    Can ever truly understand
     
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  3. NudistMike07

    NudistMike07 Member

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    You sure are!....I mean the poem, hehe ;)
     
  4. Cool Spruce

    Cool Spruce Member

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    That's awesome! I'd love to hand a small card-sized print of that to anyone who does the negativity thing, especially in grocery stores! Very nice. Thanks.
     
  5. Rugged_Soles

    Rugged_Soles Member

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    Brandon, Outstanding poem ! you sure understand the feeling, as only an avid barefooter would. I for one hope you'll write more. Archie
     
  6. John221

    John221 Senior Member

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    Nice one dude, truly witty and amusing.
     
  7. BraveSirRubin

    BraveSirRubin Members

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    Wonderful poem.
     
  8. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wow, thanks people. I didn't even think this was all that great, not one of my better ones but the only one about barefooting...thats the only reason I posted it. :)
     
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